Rainy Season
Jun 16, 2018 21:43
Rainy Season
The rainy season has started since last week.
For a while, rainy and cloudy days will continue.
I heard that you could improve concentration while listening to the sound of rain.
In fact, according to an article published in the journal "The Atlantic," people can enhance their productivity and creativity in a noisy environment of about 70 decibels, compared to a quiet environment of 50 decibels or less.
On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, your productivity and creativity seem to be deteriorated.
Unfortunately, I can't enhance my productivity on a rainy day because rain (low pressure) makes my head hurt.
The rainy season has started since last week.
For a while, rainy and cloudy days will continue.
I heard that you could improve concentration while listening to the sound of rain.
In fact, according to an article published in the journal "The Atlantic," people can enhance their productivity and creativity in a noisy environment of about 70 decibels, compared to a quiet environment of 50 decibels or less.
On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, your productivity and creativity seem to be deteriorated.
Unfortunately, I can't enhance my productivity on a rainy day because rain (low pressure) makes my head hurt.
梅雨入り
先週、とうとう梅雨入りしました。
しばらくは、雨の日や曇りの日が続きます。
雨の音が聞こえると、集中力が増すと聞きました。
実際、雑誌「The Atlantic」に掲載された論文によると、50デシベル以下の静寂な環境より、70デシベル程度の雑音に囲まれた環境のほうが、生産性や創造性が増すそうです。
一方、80デシベルを超す雑音環境であると、生産性や創造性は低下するようです。
残念ながら、私は雨の日、頭が痛くなるので、仕事が捗りません。
先週、とうとう梅雨入りしました。
しばらくは、雨の日や曇りの日が続きます。
雨の音が聞こえると、集中力が増すと聞きました。
実際、雑誌「The Atlantic」に掲載された論文によると、50デシベル以下の静寂な環境より、70デシベル程度の雑音に囲まれた環境のほうが、生産性や創造性が増すそうです。
一方、80デシベルを超す雑音環境であると、生産性や創造性は低下するようです。
残念ながら、私は雨の日、頭が痛くなるので、仕事が捗りません。
No. 1 A and C's correction
- The rainy season has started since last week.
- The rainy season finally started last week.
- For a while, rainy and cloudy days will continue.
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Rainy and cloudy days will continue for awhile.
The words are fine, just fixed the order.
- In fact, according to an article published in the journal "The Atlantic," people can enhance their productivity and creativity in a noisy environment of about 70 decibels, compared to a quiet environment of 50 decibels or less.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, your productivity and creativity seem to be deteriorated.
- On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, they say your productivity and creativity will deteriorate.
- Unfortunately, I can't enhance my productivity on a rainy day because rain (low pressure) makes my head hurt.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections! (^^)
Thank you so much for the corrections! (^^)
No. 2 David's correction
- Rainy Season
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- The rainy season has started since last week.
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The rainy season started last week.
Since last week we've been in the rainy season.
- For a while, rainy and cloudy days will continue.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- I heard that you could improve concentration while listening to the sound of rain.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In fact, according to an article published in the journal "The Atlantic," people can enhance their productivity and creativity in a noisy environment of about 70 decibels, compared to a quiet environment of 50 decibels or less.
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In fact, according to an article published in the magazine "The Atlantic," people can enhance their productivity and creativity in a noisy environment of about 70 decibels when compared to a quiet environment of 50 decibels or less.
journal --> magazine - Journal is usually used for periodicals that are more focused on a particular area. They tend to be more in-depth.
decibels, compared --> decibels when compared - A comma doesn't work here.
- On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, your productivity and creativity seem to be deteriorated.
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On the other hand, if you are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels, your productivity and creativity seem to deteriorate.
seem to be deteriorated --> seem to deteriorate -
On the other hand, your productivity and creativity seem to deteriorate when your are in a noisy environment that exceeds 80 decibels.
- Unfortunately, I can't enhance my productivity on a rainy day because rain (low pressure) makes my head hurt.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
A-and-C's suggestions are good.
Toru
Thank you so much for the corrections and comments! :)
Thank you so much for the corrections and comments! :)